Tuesday, 25 August 2015

Holiday in Bali


When I was second grade of Junior High School, my family and I went to Bali. We where there for three dayss. I had many impressive experience during the vacation.
first day, we visited  kuta Beach in the morning. We saw the beautiful sunrise together. It was a great scenery. Then we checked in to the hotel.
second day, we enjoyed the day on Nusa Dua Beach. We played so many water sport such as banana boat, jetsky, speedboat, etc.
the last day, we went to sukowati market for shopping. That was my lovely time. I bought some Bali T-shirt and souvenir.
In the evening we had to check out from the hotel. We went back home to Bekasi. So the beautiful holiday experience in Bali unforget.


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20 comments:

  1. Annida Nurulhaq6 January 2017 at 17:51

    First word using capital. “First”, “Second”, “Last day”

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  2. Annida Nurulhaq6 January 2017 at 17:51

    Kuta must capital letter

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  3. Annida Nurulhaq6 January 2017 at 17:52

    List of idea was too little

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  4. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:33

    Tidak ada tanda atau ciri khas bahwa itu sebuah paragraf

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  5. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:37

    Closing sentence make readers not understand

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  6. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:41

    Closing sentence make readers not understand

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  7. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:41

    Closing sentence make readers not understand

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  8. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:41

    Closing sentence make readers not understand

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  9. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:41

    Closing sentence make readers not understand

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  10. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:42

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  11. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:43

    First word using capital. “First”, “Second”, “Last day”

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  12. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:44

    Tidak ada tanda atau ciri khas bahwa itu sebuah paragraf

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  13. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:44

    Kuta must capital letter

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  14. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:45

    sentences not coherence

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  15. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:47

    sport ---> sports, cause the word "many" before

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  16. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:50

    There is typo word "dayss"

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  17. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:50

    kalimat terlalu simple dan little

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  18. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:52

    Give some identification or description every time you are attach some picture or table

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  19. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:54

    Atur paragraf se rapih mungkin

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  20. Annida Nurulhaq16 February 2017 at 02:56

    we have to attach connected sentence between picture

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