My
Family Holiday in Borobudur
Last
year, my big family and I went to the Borobudur temple in Yogyakarta for
holiday. I went to Yogyakarta at 05.00 a.m. I saw many beautiful scenery on my
journal there. Until I arrived in Yogyakarta, my Family and I take a rest on a
hotel in Yogyakarta.
In
the morning, we went to Borobudur temple. Borobudur temple is very beautiful.
Many mountain around the temple. I saw the architecture of temple. Before we
came back to home, me and my sister took a photo with some tourist in
there. The tourist is very handsome and
I was very happy to met them.
After that, we came
back to home. We arrived in the evening. We are very happy and I will never
forget it.
Good paragraph but there are many wrong grammar. Example: (“I take a rest”) it is wrong. (“ I took a rest) it is correct
ReplyDelete“Many mountain” --- “many mountains”
ReplyDeleteSame as first group, there are wrong grammar.
ReplyDelete-Is -was
ReplyDelete-Me and my sister - my sister and I
-Journal or journey? Not same meaning
ReplyDelete-I would never forget it.
ReplyDeleteWell, all the comments are correct. Please make sure the word “journal” or “journey”? Journal means book or paper, and journey means trip. Pay attention to your sentences; make sure that it was a plural or singular. What are the differences between listing and organizing? Is it same?. The word after “to” infinitive usually use verb 1. Take a look at your sentences “I was very happy to met them.” It must be ---.> “meet”.
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